Help your Year 5 students bump up their persuasive writing! This Persuasive Writing Bump It Up Wall will help them see exactly what quality persuasive writing looks like and how to achieve it. This Bump It Up Writing Wall makes writing growth visible using A, B and C examples aligned to the Australian Curriculum. The resource features three persuasive texts on the globally appropriate argument: Should People Feed Wild Animals?

The standout feature is the detailed teacher annotations. Every annotation explains what changed and why the writing improved. They remove the guesswork from teaching, moderation and assessment.

⭐What's included:

• 3 Exemplar Bump It Up texts that clearly show C, B and A level (Australian Curriculum aligned)
• I Can Statements writing goals
• Editable I Can Statements to add personalised learning goals
• Annotated model texts in addition to student examples
• Detailed teacher notes teacher notes that identify and clearly explain the evidence from the exemplars to show what has 'lifted'
• Labels for the Bump It Up Wall.
• Colour and Black and White resources for flexibility.

⭐Bonus: Year 5 Persuasive Writing Marking Guide

The exemplar texts explores the topic Should People Feed Wild Animals? The writing progression can support any Year 5 persuasive writing unit.

Unlike most writing exemplars, these annotations explain why the writing improves. Teachers can clearly see what has been added, strengthened and refined between each achievement level.

These exemplar texts can also be used as mentor texts, helping students analyse effective writing techniques before applying them in their own writing.

⭐Perfect for

• explicit writing lessons
• writing conferences
• moderation meetings
• assessment
• student self-assessment
• goal setting
• teacher planning
• parent - teacher discussions

⭐Why teachers and curriculum leaders will love this resource:

• aligned to Australian Curriculum Year 5 English
• annotations clearly explain what improved and why
• supports consistent moderation and assessment conversations
• detailed annotations make knowing what to teach for writing growth clear
• clearly demonstrates the progression between C, B and A achievement levels
• designed from real classroom moderation and writing instruction by experienced teachers

Students see what quality writing looks like. Teachers see exactly how to teach it. This is much more than a classroom display. It is a practical resource for explicit writing instruction, moderation and assessment.

⭐Perfect as a guide for any teacher.

Whether you are new to teaching, or have many years' experience, you will find these annotations incredibly helpful to boost students writing!

⭐You can use the annotated examples to

• identify what to teach next,
• give explicit feedback to students about how to improve their writing and
• strengthen moderation decisions.
• explicit writing lessons
• moderation meetings
• teacher planning
• writing conferences
• student goal setting
• assessment and reporting

⭐⭐See the preview to view how the annotated notes help you analyse students' writing to make decisions on next steps for teaching, student writing goals, and ensuring the moderation and assessment process is fair and consistent.

Other Year 5 Bump It Up Writing Walls:

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