# Stage 1 Sem 2 Report Comments | Units 3 & 4 | HSIE, Creative Arts, Science, PDHPE | NSW Syllabus2024 **Price:** $7.00 AUD **Seller:** TeachBuySell Seller **Year Levels:** year1, year2 **Subjects:** science, healthAndPhysicalEducation, arts ## Description (seller-submitted) Stage 1 Semester 2 Report Comments | Units 3 & 4 | HSIE, Creative Arts, Science & Technology, PDHPE | NSW Syllabus | Editable Report writing just got easier! This editable comment bank gives you ready-to-use Year 1 and Year 2 report comments for Units 3 and 4 in four key learning areas: HSIE, Creative Arts, Science & Technology and PDHPE . Every comment is written for the new NSW K–6 syllabuses and follows the familiar Stage 1 report structure of a strength or two, then a next step beginning “Building on this…”. What’s included: 45 editable PowerPoint slides Opening sentences at three levels for each subject Unit 3 and Unit 4 comments for every focus area, written at three levels that match the A–E report scale: Extending (A–B), Achieving (C) and Developing (D–E) Next steps for each unit General outcome comments for learning beyond the planned tasks A worked example for each subject showing a finished comment A quick guide to building comments, plus tips on word count and pronouns Subjects and units covered: HSIE: Aboriginal Peoples’ connections to Country, Dreaming Stories, objects and sites as evidence; community celebrations, symbols, helpers and volunteers Creative Arts: Drama and Visual Arts, covering characters and circus roles, colour, tints and shades, portraits, puppetry, ghost net-inspired artworks and clay sculpture Science & Technology: weather, seasons, seasonal calendars and rocks; the brain and senses, including digital systems that support sight and hearing PDHPE: safety strategies, online safety, identity and resilience, water and sun safety, belonging, and movement skills (side gallop, throw, kick, leap, dodge, strike) Why teachers will love it: ⭐ Each comment starts with [Name] and avoids pronouns, so you can copy, paste and personalise quickly ⭐ Matched to the A–E achievement scale used on Stage 1 reports ⭐ Comments are linked to syllabus outcome codes ⭐ Still useful if you didn’t finish every Unit 3 task, thanks to the general outcome comments ⭐… [truncated] --- View on TeachBuySell: https://teachbuysell.com.au/l/67b8db58-4277-41c6-a03f-26c95d6603c2 Marketplace: https://teachbuysell.com.au