# Stage 2 Report Comments | Units 3 & 4 | HSIE, Creative Arts, Science & Tech, PDHPE | NSW Syllabus **Price:** $7.00 AUD **Seller:** TeachBuySell Seller **Year Levels:** year3, year4 **Subjects:** otherSubject ## Description (seller-submitted) Stage 2 Report Comments | Units 3 & 4 | HSIE, Creative Arts, Science & Technology, PDHPE | NSW Syllabus | Editable Description: Report writing just got easier! This editable comment bank gives you ready-to-use Year 3 and Year 4 report comments for Units 3 and 4 in four key learning areas: HSIE, Creative Arts, Science & Technology and PDHPE . Every comment is written for the new NSW K–6 syllabuses and follows the familiar primary report structure of a strength or two, then a next step beginning “Building on this…”. What’s included: 45 editable PowerPoint slides Opening sentences at three levels for each subject Unit 3 and Unit 4 comments for every focus area, written at three levels that match the A–E report scale: Extending (A–B), Achieving (C) and Developing (D–E) Next steps for each unit General outcome comments for learning beyond the planned tasks A worked example for each subject showing a finished comment A quick guide to building comments, plus tips on word count and pronouns Subjects and units covered: HSIE: Songlines and exchange networks, significant environments, climate and settlement patterns; traditional navigation, Macassan traders, Tasman, Cook, and Flinders and Bungaree Creative Arts: shadow, marionette, Bunraku and sock puppetry; Surrealist self-portraits; readers’ theatre and scriptwriting; printmaking and 3D sculpture Science & Technology: weathering, erosion, fair testing, Earth’s layers, earthquakes and volcanoes; vertebrates and invertebrates, the skeleton, muscles and joints PDHPE: identity, boundaries, online safety, self-management, water and sun safety, upstander behaviour, and movement skills and game strategies Why teachers will love it: ⭐ Each comment starts with [Name] and avoids pronouns, so you can copy, paste and personalise quickly ⭐ Matched to the A–E achievement scale used on primary reports ⭐ Comments are linked to syllabus outcome codes ⭐ Still useful if you didn’t finish every Unit 3 task, thanks to the general outcome comment… [truncated] --- View on TeachBuySell: https://teachbuysell.com.au/l/51041c21-d02d-4a48-978c-18f882f5999d Marketplace: https://teachbuysell.com.au